When It Leaves is very special to me. The twins in
the story—Steven and KC—are named after my son, Steven and his best friend
since grade school, KC. KC is just like a son to me, and spent a great deal of
time at my home. While growing up the boys were typical in getting into trouble,
being mischievous, and making me laugh. Great memories I can assure you! LOL
In the story
the street that Steven lives on “Trellis Lane” is the real name of the road we
lived on, and where Steven lives, yet today.
I did write
the story just as Steven was approaching his 25th birthday…just like
the character in the story. And his birthday is this month, October 26th.
The rest
comes from my imagination! Many readers have commented that the story seems
short on some details. That’s intentional on my part. There is a prequel titled Whispering Breezes, that
gives an in depth look at Angie Leiberman’s life and the secret it holds. I’m
hoping to release it soon.
Then there
is also a sequel, Howling
Winds of Autumn, that will tie up all those loose ends and readers who
have been wondering about who is standing on the porch at the end of When It
Leaves, will finally have their answer! I’m planning on releasing Howling Winds of Autumn in 2014
: )
So if you’re
looking for a creepy Autumn story, I would suggest When It Leaves… but be warned, you may never look at playing in the leaves the same way ever again.
Playing in the leaves is something all children do; twins
Steven and K.C are no different. One autumn evening the five year olds ask to
go out and play until dinner is ready. What happens that night will haunt
Steven for the next twenty years. Nightmares return every autumn to remind him
of what happened, and what he saw. Now, on the night of Steven’s twenty-fifth
birthday, his thoughts are on the brother he lost so long ago. While crossing
the yard, the nightmare becomes a reality…with his young daughter caught in a
frightening struggle. Can he stop history from repeating itself?
Excerpt:
“Come
on baby, get up,” K.C. laughed, as he reached the slide of the swing set. He
climbed the seven, green metal steps of the ladder, stopping when he reached the
top of the slide. He stood on the small platform, with his arms straight out
like airplane wings. “Look at me Steve—watch this!” Without hesitation, K.C.
went under the safety rails, leaning forward on the opposite side before
jumping and landing in the leaf pile down below.
“I’ll
show you who’s a baby,” Steven yelled as he got up, the crunchy, autumn debris
clinging to his rust-colored wool jacket. He ran towards K.C. and once he
reached him, dive-bombed on top of him. The two young boys wrestled, rolling
around amongst the leaves, laughing. K.C. pulled out of Steven’s grasp and
tried to get up to run away, but was stopped when Steven reached out and
grabbed his right foot, sending him sprawling to the ground once more.
“Who’s
a baby?” Steven laughed, teasing his sibling.
“Not
me,” K.C. said as he scooped up an arm full of leaves, then threw them at his
brother. The leaves swirled around Steven as they caught the breeze, before
they slowly floated back to the ground. The boys continued their horse-play,
taking turns tackling each other and throwing leaves.
“You
look like a leaf monster,” K.C. chuckled, when he saw that the leaves were now
sticking in Steven’s hair, in addition to his wool jacket.
“I’m
a monster,” Steven said in a low pitched voice, trying to sound scary. He
stretched his arms out in front of him, walking stiff-legged attempting to
imitate a Frankenstein type walk.
“Oh
no…help me, help me,” K.C. squealed in a high pitch tone, feigning sounds of a
girl. “The baby is after me.” He couldn’t hold back his boisterous laughter as
Steven kept coming at him, walking all stiff like. He walked backwards so he
could enjoy his brother’s leafy rendition of Frankenstein, calling out the
occasional taunt. Without notice Steven broke into a run and in a few short
steps, caught up to K.C. then jumped at him and tackled him to the ground once
more. They took turns throwing more leaves at each other, along with a push
here and a shove there. Their laughter echoed in the silence of the rapidly
approaching darkness of the night.
“I
know,” K.C. stated as he got up, “let’s go around to the side of the house
where it’s darker. We can hide from mom and then when she comes looking for us
we can scare her.”
“I
don’t like that idea, mom will be mad.”
“You’re
such a baby. Baby, baby, baby,” K.C. taunted his brother yet again.
“I
am not!” Steven yelled. “I just…”
“You’re
a big fat wa-wa baby,” K.C. said as he started running to the side of the
house. He was hoping he could get to the darkened side of their home and hide,
then jump out and scare his brother. Looking back, he was glad when he didn’t
see Steven following him yet. Acting quickly, K.C. ran to the medium sized pine
tree and stood at an angle where he wouldn’t be seen. He figured its fullness
would help camouflage him completely even though it was getting darker and
harder to see. He wondered if Steven had decided to follow him and would show
up soon, he was sure their mom would be calling them in for supper any minute.
Now he merely had to wait.
Just
as he was about to give up his hiding place, K.C. saw Steven come around the
corner of the house. A devilish grin broke across his rosy, cheeks. Like a
predator waits silently for its prey, K.C. stood poised, ready to pounce on
Steven as he came closer to the pine tree. Barely able to contain his
snickering, he watched anxiously as his victim took just three more steps in
his direction and….
“Rarrrr,”
K.C. yelled as he jumped out from his hiding place. Steven let out a scream and
fell backwards. Exactly the reaction K.C. was hoping for.
“I’m
telling mom!”
“No
you’re not, baby. Come on let’s play some more before we have to go in and
eat.”
“I
don’t wanna—I hate you,” Steven replied, his eyes damp with un-shed tears.
“Baby,
baby, run to momma then,” K.C. teased. “Hey wanna bury me in the leaves? It’ll
be fun, like we did to dad with the sand at the beach.” K.C. hoped if he
changed the subject, Steven wouldn’t go in and tell on him. He flashed his
biggest grin, hoping it would help persuade his brother.
“I
don’t think so.”
“You
can bury me first. Look…” He laid down on the ground and started pulling leaves
onto himself. “Come on ba—I mean Steve. I need your help.”
Steven
hesitated, not fully trusting his brother. He was getting cold and really
wanted to go inside the house and warm up. But as he watched his twin scooping
the leaves and covering himself, he thought it would be fun to bury his brother
and get back at him. Mom would surely be mad, but it was K.C.’s idea after all.
He
crawled over to where K.C. was and started to help him. The leaves were thick
on the side of the house because of the mature Oaks and Maples that had been
there for at least a hundred years.
“I’m
gonna lay back, you can do the rest of me okay?” K.C. instructed.
“Then
what?” asked Steven.
“Then
go get mom and tell her you can’t find me.”
“That’s
mean and mom won’t like it.”
“I
will jump out and scare her when she comes closer…she’ll think it’s funny.”
“I
don’t know…”
“Look
baby, just do it or I’ll tell mom you’re the one who ran over her flowers with
your bike,” K.C. threatened. “Now hurry up and make me disappear before mom
calls us in.”
“I
wish you really would disappear,” Steven mumbled, as he reluctantly started to
finish covering his brother with the autumn foliage. He scouted around the
ground scooping up whatever leaves he could find. He looked down inspecting his
work and saw that he could still see K.C.’s gold jacket. As if reading his mind
K.C. said, “And make sure I’m all covered up. I don’t want nothing showing.”
“K.C.
I’m cold. I wanna go in.”
“You’re
almost done…just get some more to cover up my chest and face and then you can
go get mom. Make sure you don’t see me, cover me up good, so I disappear.”
Steven
did as he was instructed, gathering up several more large armfuls of leaves,
throwing them on top of the still form of his sibling. All he wanted was to
make K.C. vanish underneath them so he could go inside and warm up. It was
really dark now and he didn’t like being out at night. The eerie sounds and
blackness had always spooked him. Looking around he spied quite a few leaves
about ten steps away. As he started towards them, he hoped there would be
enough to finish the job of concealing K.C.’s entire body.
Halfway
to his destination, the wind began to increase. The gust created a strange
buzzing sound. Leaves began to swirl about the ground, adding to the vibrant
noise.
“K.C.,
I wanna go,” Steven turned towards K.C. to try to convince his brother to stop
with the idea of being buried, when he saw something that made him stop talking
mid-sentence and halt his footsteps. Where K.C. was lying on the ground, the
leaves began to swirl in a large spiral. They lifted into the air, picking up
in speed and quantity. The buzzing noise became louder; the high pitch was
starting to hurt Steven’s ears. He watched spellbound as the vegetation lifted
higher and higher, forming what looked like a tornado made of leaves to the
five year old. The dead, autumn foliage that was covering K.C. seemed to come
to life at the base of the leafy twister. The swirling mass was spinning so
fast, just watching it was making him dizzy. Steven wanted to run but was
frozen with fear, unable to move or scream for help.
Then
he saw something that would give him nightmares for years to come. The leaves
that had been covering K.C. were sucked up into the rapidly spinning leafy
tornado, until the ground below was bare. Steven’s eyes were wide with terror.
He opened his mouth and screamed but the buzzing was so loud, his voice seemed
silent in the night. He stood there releasing scream after scream, watching the
tornadic leaves spin faster and faster. His heart was racing, his head was
spinning, and he was starting to feel sick to his stomach. Yet, Steven was
oblivious to what his body was trying to tell him—to warn him. His focus was on
one thing and one thing only, the ground below the twister was empty. K.C. was
gone…vanished…disappeared.
~*~
The
honking of the horn coming from Mrs. Leiberman’s vehicle, snapped Steven back
to the present. He smiled and waved as he walked behind the blue Ford Focus and
crossed the black-topped driveway. He continued the short distance to his home,
then crossed the front yard and walked up the steps of the large white porch. He
took a few steps to his right and stood there staring at the large pine tree,
lost in thought. He liked Angie Leiberman; she had been a good friend to his
mom for many years. He remembered all too well the events that brought the
women closer together…
The
night K.C. disappeared Angie Leiberman’s home was one of the first places his
father had checked. The Leiberman’s had three children, and his dad had hoped
K.C. had snuck over there to play with them as he’d done in the past. When a
search of the neighborhood didn’t produce K.C., his mom had called the police.
He recalled Mrs. Leiberman being at their home, trying to calm his hysterical
mother, while the police questioned him about what had happened. He remembered
how his father had been angry at him, yelling at him to stop lying, every time
Steven told the middle-aged officer that K.C. had disappeared in the leaves.
For two hours they questioned him and his answer was always the same. None of
the adults seemed to believe him or the details of the events that had happened
right before his mother came outside looking for them.
Funny,
he couldn’t remember what he’d eaten for dinner two nights ago, but Steven
could recall each intricate detail of that night twenty years ago, as if it had
just happened yesterday. For weeks officers had combed the area and questioned
neighbors. Posters had been hung, and he remembered seeing the front page of
the local paper lying on the pine coffee table in the living room. The headline
read, ‘FIVE YEAR OLD BOY ABDUCTED’, and just below it was a 5x7 color photo of
K.C. smiling. An article, which lacked details, was printed next to the
picture.
As
weeks turned into months, and months turned into years, K.C.’s file eventually
joined the unsolved others and became a ‘cold’ case. No clues or evidence of
foul play were ever found. It seemed as though K.C. had simply disappeared. But
there was nothing ordinary about what had happened.
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